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Help needed!!!

Hello , 

My name is Jake. I am 12 years old. I need help because I don't get on with my parents :( . They are always complaining about my marks and my behaviour. I am often punished. Could you please give me some advice and tell me what they are expecting from me? 

Thanks!!! ;)

Jake 

45 comments:

  1. Anonymous23 January 2017 at 06:21

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  2. Anonymous23 January 2017 at 07:02

    Hello Jake!!


    We are two peoples who will help you because it's not funny evry day at home with you parent.

    - FOR BEGINING

    -you more will work at home.
    -more listening your parents.
    -less play video games and
    more chatting with your
    parents.
    -FOR THE BEHAVIOUR TALK
    ABOUT IT WITH THEM.
    I offer many advice for help you because it's very hard this pronlem with your parents.
    BYE YOUR HELP assistants !!!

    NICOLAS AND THéo

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    1. Miss Mazeau19 February 2017 at 08:36

      We are two people
      Your parents

      You SHOULD work more, listen more to your parents

      Advice to help you

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  3. Anonymous23 January 2017 at 07:02

    Dear Jack,


    We think you should talk with your parents about your marks and your behaviour.
    Try to "re-evaluate" yourself :

    -You should work more and more
    -you can sometimes help your parents to do the chores
    -You can spend more time with your parents to be more closer
    -You can ask them to be less strict

    Your parents want you to make efforts, no matter what marks you have.
    I hope our advice will be useful for you. I would like you and your parents to be closer.


    Sincerely, Camille and Margot, « teenagers magazine »

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    1. Miss Mazeau19 February 2017 at 08:40

      Very good job!
      -> to be CLOSER (you do not need more here because it is a short adjective)

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  4. Anonymous23 January 2017 at 07:03

    Hello Jake,

    We understand your problem and your difficulty with your parents. We are very sad for you. I hope to help you with some advice for a better life for you and your parents.

    Advice :
    1.You should do your homework every day and ask at your parents to help you
    2.If you don't understand in class, Talk with the teacher at the end to recap the lesson
    3.You should work a lot to have good marks
    4.You should talk with your parents about all the problems
    5.You should do chores, not every day but from time to time, for help your mother at home
    6.You should play at board game with your parents
    7.You can make little present or card with paper to make her happy

    That your parents want :
    1.They want you to respect them
    2.They want you to stop play video games everyday
    3.They want you to play with her
    4.They want you to rest with her in the evening and don't always go in your bedroom
    5.They want you to eat with her in the kitchen and don't eat in your room

    Good luke with your parents ! If you have problems again, you can call we.

    Valentine and Audrey

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    1. Miss Mazeau19 February 2017 at 08:44

      This is a very good job!
      A few mistakes :
      -> 1. Ask your parents
      -> 6.You should play games
      -> 7. Make little presentS or cardS to make THEM happy
      -> "with them" instead of "with her"
      -> You can call US

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  5. Anonymous23 January 2017 at 07:04

    Hello Jake,

    We are here to help you for your problems about your parents !
    We have many ideas and we thinks its going to get working.
    So the first rules is stop chatting in class and be more part.
    The second advice is do work sheed for your lesson and your test with that you can learn your lesson very easy, maybe with this council you have better marks !
    You should be nice with your parents and they are not punish you anymore.
    We thinks your parents want to you to be more study and less behaviour !
    Maybe they want you to stop playing video games.
    Do the housework.


    We hope our advice its going to work with your family.
    If you have any problems again don't hesitate to contact us !

    BYE

    Eden and Thylane

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    1. Miss Mazeau19 February 2017 at 08:49

      This is a good job. Some mistakes :
      -> we think
      -> It is going to work
      -> The first rule is
      -> participate more?
      -> Worksheets
      -> Maybe with this TIP, you can have better marks
      -> they will not punish you
      -> To study more and behave better
      -> Is going to

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  6. Anonymous23 January 2017 at 07:05

    Hello Jake

    Thank you for getting in touch with us for advice. Here are some tips:

    You should work more at home so you are going to have better marks. You should also learn your lessons instead of playing video games. If you chat a lot at school maybe you can stop doing it. If you do not understand at school, ask your teacher to have more exercises. We think they want you to respect the rules that they gave you. Besides, you can help them to do the chores even if they does not ask you to. Just like all the parents, maybe they want you to be less annoying. One day when your parents are working, you can surprise them by cleaning all the house.

    We wish this advice could help you for the future. See you soon


    Esmée Mercier and Chloé Coudray

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    1. Miss Mazeau19 February 2017 at 08:52

      This is a brilliant job! One tiny little mistake : "even if they do not ask you to"

      WELL DONE!

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  7. Anonymous23 January 2017 at 07:05

    « Teen Magazine »

    Hello Jake, here is some advice for change and make your parents happy.
    Maybe you should more organise your time to do your homework and your time to play.
    If you are more attentive at class, you will maybe have a best marks.
    Your parents are complainning about your marks and you are definitely anger to them, so you have a bad behaviour. And when you have this behaviour your parents punishe you.
    I thinks you are punished too because you are not listen them ; maybe for the chores or an other things...
    So I think your parents want you to tidy up your room. They want you to hoover your room.
    They maybe want you to clean the bathroom...
    And I think they want you to help their to do the chores and to do the work, even if you do not like it. Because they maybe need your help. Try to talk them, maybe it will be better.
    Test my advices and after they will maybe are nicier than before and you all will have a sweetie life.

    Kisses
    Meylise

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    1. Miss Mazeau19 February 2017 at 08:56

      This is a good job!
      A few mistakes :
      -> Advice TO change
      -> organise your time better
      -> attentive in class
      -> a BETTER mark
      -> PUNISH
      -> to helm THEM
      -> talke TO them
      -> my ADVICE
      -> they will maybe BE nicer
      -> a sweetier life

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  8. Anonymous23 January 2017 at 07:05

    Hello Jake,
    We think that you maybe overdo it.
    We are sure that your parents love you very much and that they doing that for your happiness:)
    You should thank them for all the things that they are doing for you.
    You maybe have to work a little bit more and you should listening in class !
    We think that your parents will love that:) You should change your behaviour and be more concentrate at school if you do that your marks are going to be better.
    You should be more affectionate with your parents, you can do more chores at home for example.
    We hope that this advices will help you.
    Elise and Charlize from 4e Rome magazine
    PS: Good luck!

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    1. Miss Mazeau19 February 2017 at 08:59

      Good Job!
      -> they are doing that for your happiness
      -> you should LISTEN
      -> more ATTENTIVE
      -> this ADVICE

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  9. Anonymous23 January 2017 at 07:05

    Hello Jack,
    Thank you for your letter.
    First, I think you should get better in school. Your parents are worried for you. You should listen your parents and do the chores more often. If you do effort, i think your parents are more indulgent. I think your parents attented of you more of works in school and more maturity. I know it's difficult but you give everything. They want's that you get bigger good and that you the best. You don't the disappoint because they are not trust you. You do it win their confidence in you show mature

    Ilona Le Pollès and Adèle Baczyk

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    1. Miss Mazeau19 February 2017 at 09:03

      This is a serious job but there are a few mistakes
      -> listen TO your parents
      -> MAKE efforts
      -> I think
      -> will be more indulgent
      -> Your parents want you to work more at school and to be more mature.
      -> They want you to get bigger
      -> They do not trust you
      -> the last sentence is very unclear!

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  10. Anonymous23 January 2017 at 07:06

    Dear Jake,
    I know it's difficult to live with an ambiance like that. If you want my advice, I think you should work more in the middle school. You should make progress in your homework. You should help your parents to do the chores. You should listen your parents when they say some things and you should stop answer when you are not agree with them. They are expecting from you to be more understanding.
    I hope you that my advises will help you!!!
    Océane and Chiara

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    1. Miss Mazeau19 February 2017 at 09:09

      -> in such an atmosphere
      -> listen TO your parents
      -> something
      -> stop ANSWERING
      -> when you DO NOT agree with them
      -> They want you to be more understanding
      -> My advice

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  11. Anonymous23 January 2017 at 07:07

    Hello, bro


    We name is Lilian Moustier and Seydina Sow, we am 13 years old and I noticed you have the problem with his parents. If his parents are in anger against you so, you should help they to do something as to wash the car, to cut the gress, to set the table, to tidy up his room,…
    Work more than before.
    If you have problem with them try out talk calmly.
    Sorry if is shorter.

    Good by

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    1. Miss Mazeau19 February 2017 at 09:13

      A lot of mistakes because you were not really involved!
      -> Our names are
      -> we ARE 13
      -> you have A problem with YOUR parents
      -> if parents are angry
      -> you should help THEM
      -> cut the GRASS
      -> a problem with them
      -> sorry if it is short

      You can do MUCH better than that!

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  13. Anonymous1 February 2017 at 02:19

    Hello Jake,

    For yours problems with yours parents, I think should talk because you can't progress if you don't estimate the situation, after that you should do some chores, spend your time with your family and recall the good memories with them.

    For your homework, they want you to improve your marks, I know it may sound complicated, you should ask help to your parents. Of course they will accepted because they want your own good.

    Good luck with yours parents, I hope everything will settle.

    Victoria & Clara

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    1. Miss Mazeau19 February 2017 at 09:21

      Very good job!
      -> Your problems/ your parents
      -> of course, they will accept

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  14. Anonymous1 February 2017 at 02:19

    Hello Jake

    Maybe they want you to work more harder at school for better marks.
    You should be more obedient.
    Maybe they want you to do some chores in the house like washing the car or do shopping.
    You should do your homework and less playing video games.
    Maybe they want you to go to bed earlier.
    Maybe they want you to tidy up your room and the house.
    You should set and clean the table any time.
    You should be on time at school.
    Maybe they want you to stop chatting in class.

    Goodbye dear reader

    Maxime

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    1. Miss Mazeau19 February 2017 at 09:31

      This is a very good JOB !
      -> to work HARDER (no "more" here because it is a short adjective)
      -> and play less video games

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  15. Anonymous1 February 2017 at 02:20

    JAKE'S PARENTS

    Hello,

    Jake's parents wants jack to cut the grass
    Jake should do the washing-up
    Jake's parents wants to hoover in her bedroom
    Jake should walk the dog to help your mother
    Jake should tidy up your room
    Your parents need help. They must be helped



    GOOD BYE



    M.MEHDI ET M.GBEDO

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    1. Miss Mazeau19 February 2017 at 09:37

      Attention, le choix des pronoms n'est pas suffisamment clair ici.
      Il fallait s'adresser à Jake directement pour lui donner des conseils.

      want Jake to cut the grass
      Jake's parents want him to hoover in his bedroom
      to help his mother
      tidy up his room

      A revoir

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  16. Anonymous1 February 2017 at 02:20

    English

    Hello,

    Your parents want you to do your homework and they also want you to go to bed earlier . You should set the table and you should be hardworker . If they want you to hoover and tidy up your room , you should obey.
    If you want to solve your problem , you should have better marks and you should work seriously at school .Revise your lesson everyday and they will be delighted .

    Its was a pleasure to help you ,

    Good luck !!!



    Louis , Adrien et Yoan

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    1. Miss Mazeau19 February 2017 at 09:38

      This is a very good job!
      -> be more hardworking

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  17. Anonymous1 February 2017 at 02:21

    Hello dear reader

    I read your message and I will give you some tips
    Your parents are waiting for you to help them do the housework and other like
    Make the table
    They want you to sleep early
    Do you play less games
    They also want you to focus more on your future
    That you discuss more with them
    They want you out of your room to go outside
    Go for a walk with your pet for example
    They also want you to work more at school

    I am glad to have can help you

    Nicolas 4ème Madrid

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    1. Miss Mazeau19 February 2017 at 09:42

      Travail sérieux et de bonnes choses! BRAVO!

      -> your parents want you to help them
      -> set the table
      -> to play less video games
      -> to talk more with them
      -> to go out of your room

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  18. Anonymous1 February 2017 at 02:21

    Dear Jake,
    We received your letter and we would like help you.
    You should more work at school and have a better behaviour at home.;)
    You can do some chores:
    You can set the table,
    You should help to do the washing up,
    Maybe, they wants you take the bins out,
    You can also do the hoover,
    Maybe, they wants you tidy up your bedroom,
    You should go to bed early...
    We hope this we help you!
    good luck:)

    Emma.L and Océane

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    1. Miss Mazeau19 February 2017 at 09:43

      Very good job. But...
      -> they want you to (x2)
      -> You can also hoover
      -> this will help you

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  19. Anonymous1 February 2017 at 02:22

    Mohamed

    Dear Jake,

    To solve your problems, you have to get better marks and to get them you have to do your homeworks and revise your lessons everyday. To get less punished, you have to obey your parents because I am sure, they help your when you get in trouble, so you have to be grateful.

    I hope I helped you and don't forget to be grateful and be nice with your parents, do your homework and revise your lessons everydays.

    Goodbye.

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    1. Miss Mazeau19 February 2017 at 09:45

      Very good job. Your English is getting more and more fluent. But...
      -> homework (always in the singular)
      -> they help YOU

      And you forgot to mention the parents' expectations.

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  20. Anonymous1 February 2017 at 02:22

    Hello Jake,

    I can help you !
    So I'm give you some advice :

    I think that you should be more hardworking and if you don't understand in class, you should ask your parents.
    You should help your parents when they are need some help.
    You should practice some activities with your parents.
    Maybe your parents want you to do the chores in the house.
    If you listen to your parents you will be not punish.

    I hope this advice will help you !

    xoxo LC.GR magazine

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    1. Miss Mazeau19 February 2017 at 09:25

      Good job!
      -> I'm giving
      -> When they need
      -> you will not be punished

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  21. Anonymous1 February 2017 at 02:23

    Good morning Jake,
    I'm here to help you. You should listen your parents and help your parents for chores. Spend your time and talk with them, work and listen to the school to have a good marks to give your parents prouds and if you not understand your homework you should ask help at your parents.
    Propose to your parents to do the promenade.
    I hope my advice will help you.Good bye Jake good luck boy.

    Elma and Claudia.

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    1. Miss Mazeau19 February 2017 at 09:28

      -> you should listen TO your parents
      -> good marks ( no "a" here)
      -> to make your parents proud
      -> if you do not understand
      -> ask your parents
      -> to go for a walk

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  23. Miss Mazeau19 February 2017 at 08:32

    Hello Dear jake
    -You should obey and good. ?
    -You should close your mouth when they talk about ?.
    - you want to tidy your bedroom (maybe “they want you to”? Or “you must tidy”?)
    - to do wash the car
    - to walk the dog
    - to take the bins out
    - Pleased has your parents (very unclear)

    keven and meryll

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    1. Miss Mazeau19 February 2017 at 09:19

      A lot of mistakes and sentences that were not clear or not finished!

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  24. Miss Mazeau19 February 2017 at 08:34

    This is a good job. The last sentence : "make" should be replaced by "maybe"
    "to build a new relationship"

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  25. Miss Mazeau19 February 2017 at 09:23

    Very good job!
    -> I want to write to you
    -> suggest activities
    -> sometimes

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